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Vision: Ms. Fortune looks okay, but her face expression is WAYYYYY too exaggerated. Also, her pose is a bit weird. Originality: I'm jus...

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Domination Boxing Match
One characters beats the living stuffing out of another in a boxing match. Length will most likely vary, but I'll make sure it's at least 2,000+ words.

I won't do male dominating female; yeah, it's a double standard, but I just wouldn't feel comfortable writing it.

Specify the characters (or mention if it's in first person if you're the one getting beaten up/beating up a male) and their source material. If you have a plot or story to the fight, tell me so I can properly incorporate it. I will refund/decline the commission if I feel my interpretation is inaccurate.

I will send a draft to you, revise as needed, and upload it unless you tell me not to.
4,000+ Word Boxing Match
Two characters box for 2,000 words, which tends to be about three rounds. Add another 100 points per round.

This includes normal fight and POV battles.

Don't forget to tell me about the character(s) and their source material. If you have any story or plot for why the fight is happening, tell me or I'll create my own background to it. I will refund/decline the commission if I don't feel like I can write the character accurately, because I don't want to give you a bad product.

I'll send you a draft, you give your approval/disapproval, I'll finetune it and send the final version. I will upload it to my page and tag you as the commissioner unless you ask me not to.

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Hey, folks!

About to be snowed in for 10000000 years, so I might as well post this update before I'm absorbed by pure icy death.

1). If you have an adoptable that would like to battle with one of mine (presumably in boxing matches, but who knows?), please note me!

Pixel Chibis Offer to Adopt! (open) by IriskaArt

My gal is the one on the far right with blue hair. Isn't she adorable?

:icondeiulamb: seems interested in drawing her, but it takes two to tussle, so please give her an opponent if you can!

2). I never actually tell people what I'm working on, so here goes:

  • Tharja POV Fight: Some people already figured this out, but yeah. Tharja battles against you in a duel for the ages. How can a scrawny dark mage like her put up a fight? Fuck if I know! But it'll be described in the story.
  • Gum (Jet Set Radio) vs Blaze (Streets of Rage): Grafitti-loving delinquent Gum coaxes the gang-crushing detective/cop Blaze into a brawl enjoyed by all of the GG's. Will Gum skate circles around her, or will Blaze throw her into the brig (i.e: a state of unconsciousness)?
  • (everyone's favorite!) Villager's SMASH-OUT!!: It's getting harder and harder to find interesting gimmicks for Villager's opponents, which is why it takes me so long to release stuff and part of the reason (but most certainly not the ONLY) the Peach chapter was so sloppy. Her next opponent should be Samus; but, as wonderful as the beautiful bounty hunter is, I can't really think of anything amazing for her to do besides "shoot Villager in the face", which is probably going too far even for Punch-Out standards.

Ideas that I've been toying around with:

  • Sophitia Alexandra vs Cassandra Alexandra: Two Sisters (It's Just Called Two Sisters): The two Greek girls battle against each other to determine who is the superior sibling! The humble mother, Sophitia, versus the brash and cocky (and single) Cassandra.
  • Rise Kujikawa vs Kanami Mashita: Inspired by Persona 4: Dancing All Night, the two idols who are well-known as (sort of) bitter rivals battle each other in a friendly match. Risette vs Kanamin: who will win?!
  • Miku's Bizarre Adventure: Now that she's earned the privilege to sweet makeout sessions with Len, Miku continues her underground boxing career. But how will Miku's possible future self, Append Miku, make things better or worse for her?
  • Some Sort of RWBY Fight: Characters from the late Monty Oum's RWBY hit each other in the face and stuff. I dunno who I want to use yet! I'd really like to write Ruby vs Weiss, but I'm open to anybody.
  • Please Buy Overwatch: The Match: The Fanfiction: To support Blizzard's upcoming Overwatch, I'd really like to write a battle between the incredibly British and time-travelling Tracer and the incredibly French and head-shotting Widowmaker.
And those are just a few of the ideas that I have. There are other characters I want to use in fights that I don't know who to pair up against, like Linkle from the upcoming 3DS Hyrule Warriors.

My main point is this:

Out of all the "toying around" ideas, which would you like to see? Or, if none of them, do you have something else in mind?

Besides school and social life, most of the reason I don't write as much as I'd like is because I don't actually know what I want to do. And then I don't do anything. I need a little more focus. Knowing what people would want to see would be incredibly beneficial so I could be more active!

The group of three are DEFINITELY coming out in the near future (I'm trying to make sure they're nice, interesting, and not horribly short). There are some that I've started (Cass vs Sophitia has an intro, as does Rise vs Kanami).

If I could get some opinions going around, I'd be happy to get to work on doing what people like the most.

Remember: If you have your own story idea, share it with me! The five suggested are only my own ideas; what other people would want to see is incredibly crucial

Thanks for reading, everybody!
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  • Playing: Halo 5
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Somewhere in Japan, a boxing ring is held as a training ground for a particular robot's hand-to-hand combat ability. Not a particularly outstanding one, despite the group that is holding this match being particularly wealthy. It's just a standard issue one in an office complex during the day.

In one corner awaits our robot protaganist, Aigis, who is currently equpping boxing gloves on her hands. Boxing preparation is pretty easy when you're a robot; you don't necessarily need to worry about wrapping your hands, or needing to wear a helmet. Aigis certainly isn't invincible, but she doesn't need to worry too much about trivial human things like "pain" or "brain damage"...with the exception when it comes to fighting her human opponent, Naoko, who awaits in the corner opposite, probably wondering why the hell she agreed to do this.

Near Naoko's corner was one Mitsuru Kirijo, who is holding this match. "I appreciate your time and courage to do this, Henyokai-san." she said. "Regardless of the result, I can assure you that you will be paid VERY well for doing this. Aigis has needed this training for a while in case of a situation where she couldn't use weaponry, and Akihiko never seems to be available to do it, so you were the next best candidate; so, once again, my thanks."

Oh. Right. Money. That's probably why. Oh, not even probably--DEFINITELY why.

"I've been paid to get my hands tied behind my back while a busty lady punches my face, at least this time I get to punch back I guess." She leaned against her corner. White boxing gloves, pink trunks and white top were her uniform, no boots or shoes because she hates them. "... But really? All that weaponry and no hand-to-hand combat skills? Who the hell focuses on only one range of combat?"

"Not only did her programmers have that oversight, it's all simply in the outlining in our team. When we already have enough up-close combatants in our party, we would have assumed Aigis focusing on nothing but ammunition would be alright. But as we used her for more than just shadow fighting, it became increasingly apparent that she'd have to deal with close combat situations. A rocket launcher or a minigun up close would be...well, let's say 'devastating', and it also brings the problem of Aigis trying to bring it out in the heat of combat."

Mitsuru continued. "While Aigis can disable people who hold weapons up close, which means her defense is in check, she can't really do much from an offensive standpoint. Which brings us here."

"Yeah, it would be devastating." Naoko snorts. "You know what? I might have forgot to tell you that I'm really bad at punching."

"I've definitely observed that you use more of your legs than your arms in combat, but don't worry; Aigis is practically no different from any human, and also lacks the experience of a proper boxer. I'm sure you've been in enough fights that your basic ability to throw a punch will be enough to defeat her."

"I am also sure you can defeat me, Henyokai-san." Aigis quipped from across the ring. "I will not let you...but I have enough faith that you will be an adequate sparring partner."
Naoko's eyebrow rises. "'You can defeat me', 'I have enough faith', 'adequate'... I'm not your first sparring partner, right?" She placed her hand on her hip.

Mitsuru blushed a bit. "Aigis' smug sounding attitude is...unnatural. I can assure you that is her first boxing match...as far as I am aware. But I've never told any of the scientists to have her box, so unless they've been doing it behind my back--which will require immediate action--Aigis is just very, very, confident."
Aigis smiled. "You are going to be pummeled like there is no tomorrow. Prepare yourself!"

Mitsuru gasped. "A-Aigis! That is NOT sportsman like behavior!" Mitsuru turned to Naoko, feeling embarrased again. "I-I'm sure Aigis just picked up some taunting terminology from some of our party. Th-there's no way she's going to do that, Henyokai-san. Everything is fine, r-really...a-anyway, are you ready to begin fighting?"
"Taunting?... Okay." Naoko grinned. "Am I ready to fight? Sure. Is everything fine? Sure. Am I ready to get pummeled by a robot? Sure!... Just let me dent that stupid fake face of yours first." Naoko slams her gloves together.
"I can assure you that you can not even touch me, much less dent me, Henyokai-san." Aigis took a fighting stance, still smiling. "Today, victory will be mine, no matter how far I must go to defeat you."

Mitsuru stood aghast at the fighting happening here. "It's like Akihiko and Aragaki all over again..." she thought to herself.

Mitsuru went back into reality. "E-Excellent. Your fight is until one of you admits defeat or is rendered unconcious. I will be refereeing right here, outside the ring! (Mostly for the sake of my own safety...)" Mitsuru produced a small bell and a small mallet to hit it with. "You may now..."

*DING*

"BEGIN!"

Aigis rushed out to the center of the ring, filled with energy, but making sure to keep her guard up; going on the offensive so early didn't seem like the best strategy, now that she has her opponent riled up and ready to battle. Naoko took a couple of steps forward, but going offensive wasn't her thing either. She has fought demons, other people with incredible logic-defying skills, but a robot was still something new for her. She decides to keep her guard on her chest while taking small steps on her toes to circle around her. "You look funny with those gloves on."

Aigis also began circling, waiting for an opening. "Worry not about how I look; it is my ability to fight that matters more than anything, is it not?"


Aigis throws a few jabs on her opponent's face to begin her offense, but Naoko moves her head out of the way of the jabs, confident enough to keep her guard on her chest. After a couple jabs of her own Naoko aims high and connects with a straight. Aigis' head got knocked to the side, but she had enough time to regain composure and went for a hook to Naoko's ribs, hoping to gain an opening. Naoko easily blocks the hook and counters with a double jab at the robot's face once again and tried to follow it with another straight with her other arm. While the jabs did connect, knocking Aigis' head back a bit, she managed to duck the straight and went for a straight of her own to Naoko's face as she came back up from her duck "Igh-ih!" Aigis' straight connects on Naoko's face, stunning her in place by the sudden pain of the counter.

Aigis, achieveing an opening, worked her way down for the body, digging her fist into Naoko's stomach; her eyes widened by the punch in her gut, forcing her to lean against Aigis' body from the pain and promptly falling on her knees, placing her forehead against the mat.
Aigis stood tall, looking slightly concerned at her downed for.

"Do you wish to continue? If things go any farther, I could end up seriously harming you..."

"Sh-sh-uhht up!!" Naoko tries her best ease the pain on her belly as she got up by rubbing it with her glove. "You... just surprised me... that's all..." Said Naoko breathing heavily.

"Alright, then." Aigis smiled at Naoko's spirit. "I suppose we'll move on."

Aigis stepped back from Naoko and regained her fighting stance. Naoko raises her guard as well, taking a more aggressive stance just by looking at the position of her shoulders and legs.
Aigis, feeling confident, decides to go for a hook to Naoko's breasts, hoping that she wouldn't be able to react quick enough to block it; it connects, but having relatively small boobs the hit wasn't as painful as it would be as anyone else. Eating the pain of said punch, Naoko counters with a cross aimed at Aigis' temple and stays close to follow her with jabs at her face.

"Agh!" screams Aigis in a moment of shock.
"So you CAN feel pain, huh!?"

Naoko kept her rush of jabs, trying to push her to the ropes. As much as Aigis wanted to retort, she was more worried about avoiding the hail of jabs, keeping her guard and trying desperately to block each one. Naoko stops her jabs and takes a step back while crouching, faking a rest from her punches, just to quickly take a step forward and hit Aigis' body with an uppercut that landed into her gut. Aigis leaned forward, trying not to make any audio cues about her pain, but you could tell from her face that it was a big impact. Not being as nice as Aigis by letting her lean on her body, Naoko tries to push her back with her shoulder and hits her with another cross on her cheek to knock her down. Aigis barely catches herself during her fall by sticking her gloves out.

Mitsuru counted in the background: "1...2...3..."

Aigis breathed heavily. "So...it appears...we are even." Aigis shook her head in order to restore her senses before slowly getting back up around the count of 5 or 6.
"I'll guarantee you that that won't happen again!" Aigis said, refocusing.
"If I were using my legs you would be sleeping of electrical sheep right now." Naoko said confidently, taking some distance from her opponent.
"Clever; a reference to the novel of the same name published in 1968. But surely you can still find the strength to defeat me with your fists? Also, I do not have feet; there is no possible way I could combat you in that field."
Aigis dashed closer, getting ready to feign a body blow. "I know you don't have feet-- Wha-!?"

Naoko lowered her guard to block the body blow, falling for the bait. Aigis stopped the body blow at just the right moment, instead landing a wicked right cross. Naoko's head is violently twisted to the side by the robot's cross, spreading blood her her nose and mouth on the blue canvas on her feet. Aigis decided to get a little brutal, seeing as her opponent also didn't show any mercy previously. She opted for a left cross, and a scene similar to the one that happened a second ago played: Naoko spits more blood on the other side of the canvas. She looked dizzy, barely standing on her feet, with blood dropping from her nose and mouth, bruises starting to form on both of her cheeks too, but she still had her guard up ready to fight.

Naoko started to receive jabs all over her body and face; she was too tired to throw punches and all she could do is walk back to try to avoid them, hoping for Aigis to give her a second to rest, knowing that it obviously wasn't going to happen. Naoko was fine blocking some of the jabs, that was until she felt the corner hitting her back; there was no place she could escape to now.
Aigis felt a bit of karmic glee knowing that she essentially got Naoko stuck into the same situation she was just in. "This is how it ends, Henyokai-san." she said, as she launched a brutal right uppercut to the blue-haired girl's jaw.

And so, the fight was over. Aigis' uppercut connects with Naoko's jaw, spreading blood over the poor Mitsuru who was just watching the fight too close for her own good. Naoko slowly slided down against the corner to sit on the mat, with her head still up from the uppercut, she was unconscious.

But there was also something else on her, something that looks strangely off from her: Under her lost, emotionless, semi-closed eyes of defeat, tears were found sliding down on her cheeks.

This is what happened to her every day for a whole month, this was her story every night for 31 days. Going to a random bar, get tied up against a corner just for someone to beat her up for fun. This is what she was willing to put up with for her family. But those memories of humilliation and pain are hardly going to disappear, Naoko knew this well, it was just a job after all, a job she had to take for the sake of others. All she had left to do is drop her pride, stomp on it a couple of times and let out of a cry of desperation at the sky in the shape of tears.

A despair unending, but...

"Henyokai-san did so well! That was a very fun battle! Her tactics are..." Aigis thinks of a word that doesn't sound incredibly professional. "'Radical'. Yes, that seems like an appropriate word."

"While we could've avoided that mess you made, she's even more impressive than I thought...any normal man or woman would've been left unconscious at the first knockdown. The fact that she stuck it out for one more is impressive!"

"I did not think anyone besides Akihiko-san could knock me down or pierce my armor with their fists alone...and clearly, I was wrong. I should thank her when she wakes up."

"I think she'd truly appreciate that, Aigis. You really should."

"I was so happy to banter with her as well. I felt a true bond, Kirijo-san!"

The tears stopped. Naoko took a minute to realize--this was different. She wasn't pummeled for fun for a pathetic pay to help her family. The pay was better, the intention was kinder...

...and the people weren't scumbags. Hell, maybe she'd even say...friends.

She wasn't worthless, and while she sure can't box, at least she was stronger than most. And that was all that mattered.
Aigis vs Naoko NEO: Reloaded: Revengeance: HD Ver.
Full Image Here:

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It's back!

Some of Aigis' dialogue has been changed to be a lot less aggressive than in the original.

Aigis was created in a laboratory by some scientists, and is owned by ATLUS.

Naoko was created on a piece of paper by local cool guy :iconmedleyassault:, and is also owned by him. Check him out! No, seriously, check him out.
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"LADIES AND GENTLEMEN, WELCOME BACK TO SMASH BOX!"

A loud chorus of cheers, as usual.

"IN THIS CORNER, ACCOMPANIED BY FORMER WVBA CHAMPION LITTLE MAC: THE MAYOR OF SMASHVILLE...THE VILLAGERRRRRRRRRR!"

The Villager was a lot more relaxed than normal. Peach wasn't going to easy on her, but at least she knew that they had a common goal. She didn't seem nearly as crazy as Zelda or Lucina did...maybe this fight would be a lot less stressful and injury provoking!

...she hoped.

"AND IN THIS CORNER, THE PRINCESS OF THE MUSHROOM KINGDOM: PEAAAAAAAAACH!"

Peach was absolutely dolled up, make-up and all, but that's what one should expect. The Villager realized Peach was pretty girly, at least compared to Zelda. Heck, Zelda even dressed up as a boy! It doesn't get any less-girly than that.

She had a fairly standard sports top + trunk combo: but, fittingly enough, all pink with a blue orb on the cleavage part of the top.

She waved and blew kisses to her adoring crowd, and seemed completely happy to be there.
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The two fighters faced each other in their fighting stances, both smiling happily.

"Are you ready?" asked Peach.

"Born ready! Well...I mean, I wasn't really born to box, but like...yeah! I'm ready! Totally!"

Peach giggled. "Works for me."

The bell sounded loudly, and the battle began.
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Peach  and Villager began to circle each other, pacing and waiting for the right chance. Villager, gaining confidence, lands a punch that sails through Peach's guard (which is wide open, oddly) and smacks her right in her pretty face. Peach's head jolts back, and she stumbles. Also odd: that punch wasn't very forceful.

Regardless, Villager refuses to look a gift horse in the mouth and uses the chance to follow up. She takes to Peach mid-section with jabs and a hook to close the deal, which Princess Peach takes without resistance, and instead with gasps and grunts.

Peach finds herself on the ropes as the Mayor decides to advance onward once again. Peach finally decides to put some more effort into her blocking and manages to guard against most of Villager's hits, but a well-placed straight ruins any chance of that, with a few extra jabs as Peach collapses on the ground.

The ref begins to count, but Villager felt good about herself.

"I thought your name was Princess 'Peach', not Princess 'Pushover'! C'mon, get serious!" she taunted, but less to insult and more to encourage.

Peach got up, and giggled softly. "Just warming up!" she proclaims, soft smile on her face as she retakes her fighting position.

The ref resumed the fight, but it looks like Peach would start landing finally landing some attacks. The Villager noticed that her speed and footwork weren't bad, but her punches absolutely were. When Peach landed a hit, it felt as though she wasn't really trying; almost as if she just didn't want to hit that hard. It makes sense for a princess, but she seemed knowledgable about combat; she wasn't just an airhead, eight?

Even if she wasn't, it didn't matter: "This is a fight, darn it!" Villager thought. "So FIGHT!"

As more pitter-patter punches landed in Villager's face, she grew bored and decided to just give a mighty uppercut in the middle of Peach's lovetap session. Peach, in a nearly comical fashion, twirled into a corner and was defenseless again. The Villager couldn't resist; she was right there for the taking!

She went into a rapid-fire flurry of blows. Hooks, jabs, and straights, organized in unique combo after unique combo to every part of Peach's body. The Villager began to assume that most people who came from the Mushroom Kingdom are pretty weak, considering how bad that Wendy O Koopa girl was at boxing. She was afraid that this match would end as that one did: with her opponent as a bloody mess. At least Peach was a decent person!

But, as afraid as she thought she was, she couldn't help but smile as her fists rushed over her target, and the chants of "Villy! Villy! Villy!" grew louder.

But all good things must come to an end; the referee stepped in and gave Peach an 8-count. Surprisingly, the princess said she was fine and the ref continued the fight.

The princess was most certainly not fine. Her arms began to slowly lower, and it seemed like she held a look of despair on her face. That look was not "I'm fine"; that was "please end it"!

The Villager felt something of a bloodlust boil up in her. She liked Peach, but the thrill of the fight, the scent of victory growing stronger, and the hungry crowd ready for war is something that a friendship can't provide. Sending Peach to Dreamland (not the one inherited by Kirby, that adorable little pink ball) became her top priority.

The Villager raised her fist high in the air, and looked towards the crowd, getting more and more hyped by the second with this pose. She slowly rotated her arm...and then unleashed a wild uppercut to the chin of Princess Peach, sending some scattered blood, sweat, and possibly some teeth. Princess Peach herself nearly slipped under consciousness, but held on to the ropes like her life depended on it--

*DING DING*

--and got saved by the bell.

Viillager couldn't help but wave at her adoring crowd. It was like being mayor all over again! Regardless, she sits in Little Mac's corner, preparing a strategy to wrap this match up in a neat package (and Peach in a body bag, possibly).
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"Should've just ended it when you could instead of getting all showboaty." Mac remarked, eating a granola bar.

"Ah, it's fine!" Villager said, relaxed. "A light gust of wind will send her down for a 10-count; trust me."

"Really? She looks okay to me."

The Villager looked at her opponent from her corner again.

"...excuse me, what?"

Peach was...healed, somehow. Completely. As if that first round wasn't even a thing that happened. Like time skipped a beat or two. And now Peach looked infuriated.

"Soooo...that's just a thing now?!" Villager couldn't believe it. "Is she gonna do that next round, too?"

Little Mac shrugged. "Who knows? These fights are nigh unpredictable. In any case, she...doesn't look super content about the beating you gave her. If she's enraged like that, she shouldn't be too focused. Use that to your advantage!"

Villager sighed. "I guess that's my only option, huh? Well...okay. I'll do my best!"

Little Mac nodded and smiled. "I expect nothing less."

Villager pounded her gloves together and stood up, facing her opponent once again.
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The second round started off, and Peach stared daggers into the Villager's soul.

"H-hey, Peach, you're not MAD or anything, right?" Villager said. "This is a friendly fight after all, remember?"

The Villager's fear only grew as Peach threw a straight with wrath and speed amplifying its power. The Villager ducked, but Peach refused to make a repeat of last round; she followed with another once the Villager rose back up that connected and hit the mayor square in her face, sending stinging pain throughout.

As the Villager staggered and tried to rise her guard, Peach landed multiple body blows that kept coming and coming. As the Villager started to get locked into a corner, she attempted to circle Peach and hit her with a jab. While it connected, and kept Peach temporarily at bay, she could only land a few more before Peach continued her rampage. Through gritted teeth, Peach landed a meaty right hook into the Villager's jaw, spewing blood and spit from her mouth as she fell on her back hard.

She stared at Peach, who had her back at the ropes. As the ref counted, Peach began to break her silence.

"If you wanted this to be a friendly match, why did you decide to mess up my looks?! Do you know how long it takes for me to get ready in the morning?! You've crossed the line, sister!"

...that seemed like a petty reason, the Villager thought, but she IS pretty darn girly. She hit like a (wo)man possessed, though. Either way, it doesn't seem like she's going to be able to overpower Peach this round.

The Villager got up at around 6, ready to go.

Remembering Little Mac's words, she tried to let Peach's newfound aggression open up holes in her defense.

As the ref finished giving the clear to continue, Peach barreled towards Villager with a fist aimed for her face yet again. The Villager decided to keep tagging Peach with her jabs. Yet again, Peach throws a hook that the Villager manages to dodge, and she counters with some body blows followed by a hook of her own.

As they connected, Peach's expression grew less angry and more tired, but she wasn't done yet. Yet another straight--the Villager dodged. Immediately after, a hook; the Villager dodged. The Villager then decided to risk it all; an uppercut to rival Peach's own. Both connected, both made their opponent feel agony coursing through their body, and both sent the other tumbling down.

The Villager wasn't sure if she was going to be able to get up, but she wasn't giving up. She clutched the ropes. The count was currently 4. With all the remaining strength she had, she lifted herself up. By the time she stood, the count was 7. She staggered back to her corner.

As she walked, she saw out of the corner of her eye; Peach was getting up slower than she was, but just made it in time after the count of 9.

The referee would normally ask if either fighter could continue, but he...didn't, oddly enough. "Some ref," the Villager scoffed out of earshot.

She hoped that the bell would ring to end this round, and as she began to slowly trudge towards Peach, it did. She breathed a sigh of relief and returned safely to her corner with Little Mac.
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"This is probably the part where I chew you out for trying to do a cross counter, but...that was pretty smart, honestly."

In between heavy panting, the Villager replied: "Yeah...but MAN, does it hurt."

Little Mac examined the situation. "The best course of action now is to play it safe. Peach is going to be just as tired as you are, and if she's still out for blood, she'll go for something big again that'll leave her open. Don't leave yourself open at all costs; no tanking hits, no dodging. Just put her down quickly."

"She really let this fight get to her head, yet she seemed so calm before..."

"Some people just don't like losing."

"Or getting punched in the face!"

"That's true. Anywho, looks like it's time to finish this. Knock her out, Villy."

Villager smiled at Mac. "Gotcha, boss!"

The final round approached.
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The Villager moved slowly towards Peach. Both stared each other down. Peach's expression was not one of anger, or weariness, but one of determination. A friendly spar with two sides fighting for the same thing became a brutal battle that would typically end any friendship or alliance.

Neither of them wanted to make the first move, because it could be their last for this match; but someone had to.

Peach feinted a blow that Villager wasn't falling for. More circling and staring into each other's eyes. Villager tried to go with a solid uppercut to Peach's gut, which made her clutch her gut, but it wasn't enough to keep her open for long. Peach nearly fell from that blow, but she forced herself to keep standing.

The Villager came too far to lose this fight. She had to keep throwing strikes. She wasn't going to risk anything, and someone had to despite Mac's advice.

As Peach threw a hook, the Villager ducked and landed another stomach blow. Peach weakly launched a slow jab, and a hook connected to Peach's face.

Peach's gloves dropped. She was done. All that was left was the killing blow.

Villager reeled her right back...and unleashed. The punch connects. Peach falls onto the canvas loudly; the noise rang out across the arena.

The count was barely needed, but 10 seconds later, Villager claimed victory.

Another match down, and the ladder was climbed.

She had to disregard Mac's advice for the fight, but sometimes risks need to be taken.

There was only one question left running through her mind, and it was a question she asked before:

Who's next?
Villager's Smash-Out!! Chapter 3: PEACH
Here it is. Holy shit.

I didn't like the ending for this but I never like my match conclusions sooooooo yeah.

Feedback is always appreciated.

More coming!
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Hey, folks!

About to be snowed in for 10000000 years, so I might as well post this update before I'm absorbed by pure icy death.

1). If you have an adoptable that would like to battle with one of mine (presumably in boxing matches, but who knows?), please note me!

Pixel Chibis Offer to Adopt! (open) by IriskaArt

My gal is the one on the far right with blue hair. Isn't she adorable?

:icondeiulamb: seems interested in drawing her, but it takes two to tussle, so please give her an opponent if you can!

2). I never actually tell people what I'm working on, so here goes:

  • Tharja POV Fight: Some people already figured this out, but yeah. Tharja battles against you in a duel for the ages. How can a scrawny dark mage like her put up a fight? Fuck if I know! But it'll be described in the story.
  • Gum (Jet Set Radio) vs Blaze (Streets of Rage): Grafitti-loving delinquent Gum coaxes the gang-crushing detective/cop Blaze into a brawl enjoyed by all of the GG's. Will Gum skate circles around her, or will Blaze throw her into the brig (i.e: a state of unconsciousness)?
  • (everyone's favorite!) Villager's SMASH-OUT!!: It's getting harder and harder to find interesting gimmicks for Villager's opponents, which is why it takes me so long to release stuff and part of the reason (but most certainly not the ONLY) the Peach chapter was so sloppy. Her next opponent should be Samus; but, as wonderful as the beautiful bounty hunter is, I can't really think of anything amazing for her to do besides "shoot Villager in the face", which is probably going too far even for Punch-Out standards.

Ideas that I've been toying around with:

  • Sophitia Alexandra vs Cassandra Alexandra: Two Sisters (It's Just Called Two Sisters): The two Greek girls battle against each other to determine who is the superior sibling! The humble mother, Sophitia, versus the brash and cocky (and single) Cassandra.
  • Rise Kujikawa vs Kanami Mashita: Inspired by Persona 4: Dancing All Night, the two idols who are well-known as (sort of) bitter rivals battle each other in a friendly match. Risette vs Kanamin: who will win?!
  • Miku's Bizarre Adventure: Now that she's earned the privilege to sweet makeout sessions with Len, Miku continues her underground boxing career. But how will Miku's possible future self, Append Miku, make things better or worse for her?
  • Some Sort of RWBY Fight: Characters from the late Monty Oum's RWBY hit each other in the face and stuff. I dunno who I want to use yet! I'd really like to write Ruby vs Weiss, but I'm open to anybody.
  • Please Buy Overwatch: The Match: The Fanfiction: To support Blizzard's upcoming Overwatch, I'd really like to write a battle between the incredibly British and time-travelling Tracer and the incredibly French and head-shotting Widowmaker.
And those are just a few of the ideas that I have. There are other characters I want to use in fights that I don't know who to pair up against, like Linkle from the upcoming 3DS Hyrule Warriors.

My main point is this:

Out of all the "toying around" ideas, which would you like to see? Or, if none of them, do you have something else in mind?

Besides school and social life, most of the reason I don't write as much as I'd like is because I don't actually know what I want to do. And then I don't do anything. I need a little more focus. Knowing what people would want to see would be incredibly beneficial so I could be more active!

The group of three are DEFINITELY coming out in the near future (I'm trying to make sure they're nice, interesting, and not horribly short). There are some that I've started (Cass vs Sophitia has an intro, as does Rise vs Kanami).

If I could get some opinions going around, I'd be happy to get to work on doing what people like the most.

Remember: If you have your own story idea, share it with me! The five suggested are only my own ideas; what other people would want to see is incredibly crucial

Thanks for reading, everybody!
  • Listening to: Walk Like an Egyptian
  • Reading: Candide
  • Watching: Steven Universe
  • Playing: Halo 5
  • Eating: Chicken Nugger
  • Drinking: Water

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Gadgetboy197 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2016
Do you still take commissions?
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ChrisMcClary Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Thank You for all the faves and  the watch ^-^! And I apologize for getting back so late
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JeyraBlue Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the fav! Llama Emoji-03 (Sparkles) [V1] 
Chloe and Alex- Life is Strange Boxing by JeyraBlue       
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Dobudo Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2016
Thanks for all your support! I'm really glad that people like you enjoys my work. Your comments, faves and supports always gives me motivations to keep drawing.
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ScoutsnRainbows Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016
That's the idea! I'm glad to know I can keep you motivated. :D
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Luke54321 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for the fav, I'm really glad that you liked it. If you don't mind me asking, was there anything in particular that you like about it?
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ScoutsnRainbows Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016
The ghost heads in the background are really rad, and I like that you took special notice of the naginata. :D
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Luke54321 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why thank you, I'm glad that my efforts to the detail was to your liking
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SunChief Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016
Thank you for the favourite! :) (Smile) 
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ScoutsnRainbows Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016
NP! :D
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